Zhenyu's World
After revised
Writing Showcase
Analysis of my process for creating an analysis essay that answers the course question and a reflection of my progress toward course objectives.
Planning and Exploratory
The one I feel most strongly about the Guardians of the Galaxy trilogy
The second movie was the one I felt most strongly about because I think the main character, Star-Lord, grew the most in it. And it's also the best most of the Guardians of the Galaxy members turn to maturity
Peer Review and Revision
This is the review I think I got the most out of, because this review was made for my first Little Mermaid movie annotation, and it made me better at any movie annotations I've made since then!
Helping others with their reviews really helped me a lot, and after looking at others' notes I was able to identify problems in my own notes as well, as well as things that needed to be improved!
Self-Review and Revision
Before revised
It is very important for an essay to be readable and understandable. There were some places in my article where the language wasn't very good and I did some optimizations
After revised
Before revised
The transition of the article is also a very important point. My article was missing some transitions before and this can cause a break in the article and get the reader lost. Here is an example of one of my revisions.
After revised
